Well besides the fact he looks naked ,0 the boy and mother are in incorrect planes or more accurately facing different directions, so it doesn't look like she's holding him properly
#Anatomy help
fluid needle
But it's barely noticeable i think it may be the lack in perspective of the boys arms
wispy vapor
Yeah I'm also having trouble making the hug feel more desperate 😭😭
I hadn't added his clothes yet too
fluid needle
Oh so is he supposed to be embarrassed or what exactly is going on? It'd help another and id be able to show u how to fix it
Alot freaking autocorrect
wispy vapor
In a nutshell they're in a space where it's like a dream built by her for him, but she's dying and can't maintain the dream anymore. Its a goodbye hug ig, but he still doesn't grasp that fully
I feel like I can't explain properly, I can show you that part of the story directly if you wish xD
fluid needle
Sure sounds interesting
wispy vapor
WAIT
LMAOOO WRONG PHOTO THIS IS EMBARRASSING
Here 😭😭
As i was saying, I'm planning to make his side the "endless field" he believes he lives in, while on her side it's the facility she's working in
"Dark and day" kinda thing
fluid needle
Ahh I see
Probably not to helpfully but the expression are really key to this, since u can't really see the son's really show the apologizing tone of her facial expression. You really con only do the with a sorrowful smile and some eyebrow move I forgot
The cloths also can show off the emotion when u get to it
I would make a better example but err not to good at that style
wispy vapor
Probably not to helpfully but the expression are really key to this, since u can...
You're a life saver this looks wayyy better already 
Does it look okay now? Anything else you find worth pointing out?
