#pls give me some critique and how to improve

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dapper egret
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my first digital drawing

wild bay
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maybe dont use too many scratchy lines 🙂 it makes the drawing messy and the eye cant really focus

urban bolt
# dapper egret my first digital drawing

good job, for your first digital drawing, this shows a lot of potential and youre off to a really strong start!
i would suggest to really enhance and exaggerate the lines on the foot and hand to really show the viewer that the character is in motion:)

dapper egret
fading aurora
# dapper egret my first digital drawing

A lot of concepts can be refigured, but for a first digital drawing it's really good.

What I suggest is taking a few steps back, if youve trained form gesture and anatomy on traditional mediums, you should take a couple steps back and relearn form, gesture and anatomy... It feels like a waste of time but it's not, you will save yourself a lot of time.