#Yall know how I can improve overall?
random moat
mellow shard
I assume you love drawing a lot of details but there's so much its hard to know what i'm looking at. In manga a pattern you'd see is that there's a lot of details close up and not much details in the back ground. This draws the eyes of the reader to the part of the manga you want the most attention on. I suggest watching videos on how famous manga artists go about drawing their manga. I also suggest learning some body anatomy and gesture drawing to make the poses of your character less stiff. And learn how armor is drawn as well by studying armor references. But yea overall your art looks rlly cool!
random moat
I assume you love drawing a lot of details but there's so much its hard to know ...
In which specific panels is this shown, usually? cause some are intentional, also ty for the criticism, and do you know anything else I could improve
mellow shard
Yes the very first panel in the first pic is meant to show the environment the guy is in but its still difficult to tell what is going on in that panel at first glance. A lot of the details are of the same values and the lines are a bit sketchy and not crisp. I'd suggest working on line art as well. But yea that's all I could say I look forward to how the story of your manga goes
random moat
Yes the very first panel in the first pic is meant to show the environment the g...
You know any good videos on values?
mellow shard
