#Please judge this and give critique 🙏🏻

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hushed dragon
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I feel like something’s off, i really dont know how to incorporate the proper lighting on her face

  • i feel her face proportions are all off
  • Its a wip i have yet to work on the cage
    And so many other minor things

I initially made this based off a quote,
“I am a cage, in search of the bird” - Frank Kafka
But honestly i havent been able to finish it cuss im just stuck TT

Any suggestions on how i can make this piece better would be greatly appreciated

mystic drift
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you can add more darness to the borders of the painting so the focus would be more to the centre

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And to add a bit of contrast

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And if possible add some highlight which is coming from the lighting above

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Some to the birds and most of it to the hair

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Is it gouache or watercolor?

hushed dragon
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Its acrylic !

hushed dragon
mystic drift
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Just in case😅

hushed dragon
mystic drift
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Alright