critique?

[formal turtle]

ive been looking at this for way too long so i cant see as many mistakes now. the jewelry i think looks the weirdest so thats probably my main focus but any critique helps, i know its not the best

[rigid spoke]

The main thing is that you havnt rendered the necklace enough. It looks flat while everything else looks 3D. Have you looked up tutorials on drawing chains or rings?

[formal turtle]

no i have not, i was just using a reference.

[formal turtle]

i got rid of the necklace, can i have some feedback on this one?

lowkey i feel like the collarbone area is weird

[round star]

Definitely it looks a bit low maybe put it up more.