What should I learn to improve my work?

[full sleet]

Ts so weird....I feel like somethings off and weird but I dont know what, so I need your eyes on it..

[meager sparrow]

From what it looks like, the face is split vertically in two planes. One is tilted away from view, so the elements should be narrow compared to the in focus plane. I would try lengthening the right eye a bit to the left and see if that fixes things!

[full sleet]

@meager sparrow like this?

Seems to work.. idk 😅😅

Got any other suggestions?
I need more 🙏🙏

[torpid mauve]

i feel like basic perspective/proportion/anatomy studies would do well for u, if youre too lazy (like me) then just take a few artists u like, analyze their pieces and what u like ab them and implement that stuff into ur art

[full sleet]

That s a good tip, Im super lazy to study the basics. I never thought about it like that before, sounds kinda fun 😁👍

[meager sparrow]

I don't know if even mine is accurate, but the idea is there. Essentially if you take a piece of paper and rotate it, you can visually see how much it shrinks widthwise in your vision based on the angle. If you get a general idea of the face in simple shapes, some things start to shrink and disappear like that.

[verbal kite]

I would recommend morpho simplified study book,
And you study from there.

Also something off that u mentioned:
Idk if you see it but your oc character’s neck can’t support how heavy her head is and look like she got scoliosis

Everything just look off, Remember foundation first! Good luck on your art endeavor

[full sleet]

Thanks a lot... from your advice it feels like my way of drawing might actually change, turns out everything was kinda off. From my newbie eyes it looked normal, but luckily you saved me 😅🙏

Honestly, I’m kinda embarrassed right now..

[verbal kite]

Nothing to be embarrassed, I am not good compare to master. No one should be shame about their art journey!