this is just a personal guess but the pose looks off to me
#Help with character drawing
shut crane
i think itd be better if she wasnt twisted around more like, just her neck turned while the rest of her body faces away
im not sure if u can comfortably twist your lower body that far without twisting the rest of your back with it
spice garden
Hii!! Agree with Devi. I think you have combined both views when looking at a torso from the back but also from the side. Since we can see her back, but also profiled belly (since she is wearing a jacket), if that makes sense. I did two attempts to hopefully make it easier to see back view vs profile view. If you were to choose profile view, I would maybe move her legs and head a slightly bit forward.
I might have given it more heel shoe on profile, so ignore that 😅
waxen moon
this is just a personal guess but the pose looks off to me
@spice garden THANK YOU SM! I appreciate your adviceee :D
I’ll definitely implement these tips!
Do you have any advice for how the top part of the jacket would look on the side pose?
I’m not sure I did that correctly
spice garden
the collar?
waxen moon
the collar?
Yeah!
I’m redrawing it right now
I have a hard time visualizing clothes sometimes 😅
spice garden
I have a hard time visualizing clothes sometimes 😅
something like that? Im not 100% sure myself
waxen moon
something like that? Im not 100% sure myself
Wait that looks so much better omg thank you!
Collars will be the death of me someday