#need help with a semi anime style drawing!

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soft juniper
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i feel like theres so much wrong with this that i dont even know where to start. normally i do realism but i really wanted to branch out into more stylized stuff. mainly i feel like i need help with making the head look connected to the body, the hand on the bottom (because i dont really like how its posed in the reference) and making the raised arm look more connected to the body. and also the other eye. sorry ik thats a lot but im struggling soo bad 😭 stylized art is so so so so hard for me

hearty falcon
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for the head issue, see how her shoulder in the ref covers up the side of her face. in your artwork, it looks like you made the head/chin smaller and higher up so that it doesnt

limber pebble
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I flipper it

soft juniper
limber pebble
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OH MB

soft juniper
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i flipped it cuz its easier for me to draw from the right than the left if that makes sense(?)

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ITS OKK

limber pebble
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Oh yea def

abstract meteor
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Simplify into basic shapes and think in half’s between points to find perportions

shrewd steeple
hearty falcon
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if the arm looks chubby its only cuz of the head size. it looks correct on the body. i wouldnt heed that much mind

tribal garnet
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hiya! I kind of draw in a anime semi realistic style too and everything looks good and if I had to nitpick advice I would say make sure to know the angle and where the shapes would kind of be

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such as the eyes and mouth it’s all drawn horizontally when the face is facing a bit more angle!

tribal garnet
hearty falcon
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YAASSS

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a lot better!

shrewd steeple
tribal garnet
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woahh that does look much better yeah!

tribal garnet
# tribal garnet

(Feel free not to take advice but it may help with the vision of the facial structures!)

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I was just nitpicking lolol

hearty falcon
soft juniper
tribal garnet
soft juniper
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i still dont know what to do for the hand ☹️ ill look for references but i think finding a good hand reference thatll fit the arm in that position might be hard

tribal garnet
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you can try doing a gun shake!

limber pebble
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Use magic poser!!

tribal garnet
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shape!

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OO

limber pebble
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its rlly helpful w anatomy

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its an app on mobile and i think web asw

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where u have a 3d model u can shape

fierce pivot
soft juniper
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any glaring changes i should make before i start with detailing?

limber pebble
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Here the bend is lower

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But the curve is higher

soft juniper
limber pebble
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Sorry for tbe late reply

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But i dont have access to my ipad rn so this will be rlly rough

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So the knee bent

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Area is where tbe curve happens