Critique?

[plucky vale]

One of the few "finished" pieces I've done lol. I'd like to know if there's any critique or any thoughts on it for future reference. Ping me when you reply! It helps me see it easier.

[signal gust]

In my opinion, I think you shouldn't blurr or smooth everything. It makes it look a bit less professional. Blurry background and smooth face is perfect but I think it's dress should be a little detail to make this artwork stand out.
Either way your art is impressive 👏

[zenith apex]

Okay just a suggestion, the hair looks like it’s kinda poofy so i feel like the veil should be a bit bigger to the left of the drawing. I would use liquify tool if you don’t already know what it is 🫶 also maybe a bit darker on the shading to the right of the neck that’s nearest to the face

Okay one more thing, I think you should put really light details of teeth inside the mouth because everything else looks so pretty and detailed

[plucky vale]

Is this better? I edited everything accordingly, except for the veil thing. When I was originally drawing this piece, the hair was indeed very poofy lol

But I shaved down the top because if the veil conformed to her hair, it would make it look like the veil had no weight and that her hair was literally rock solid 😭

[plucky vale]

The blurry smoothness is part of my style! It makes it feel soft and easy, so I used it to create a feeling and mood ! I'll see about the clothes. Ty

[zenith mirage]

Agree, I like how the veil pushes the hair down