Help with drawing hair

[naive oak]

the 2nd drawing's bangs look so bad omg

[urban kettle]

You need to make their craniums bigger and make the hair even bigger than that. if you look at hair it doesent grow straight down and sticks to the head, it has volume on the roots. Imagine the hair as a helmet, it's bigger than your head because it's going over it so, when you draw your heads don't use that line for your hair as well

[urban kettle]

The only thing you're missing is that valume, the way you do lines and generally draw the hair is really good

[rough vortex]

Something you should always remember about hair is that it's not the individual strands or small groups hair falls in chunks so in the first reference,You have that one piece in the front, THAT'S GOOD when you draw hair, keep that in mind!

[naive oak]

thank youu the helmet thing makes sense

[naive oak]

thank you sm