#Gods of Life & Death for my new webcomic, any suggestions for improvement?

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hazy plover
heavy socket
# hazy plover

Maybe its because I dont have a full body image so I cant see them entirely but

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If youd shown these to me without saying what they were

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I'd just assume the left is fluttershy as a human and the right is some knight

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I think with your concepts you should lean more into them

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Since he is the god of life (which is typically portrayed as a woman because women give birth, i dont see why it would be a man but artistic liberties ig), show him in an environment where things are growing

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Tbh j dont know how to signify life through characters, but I'm sure if you did research

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On cultures you find interesting

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In their interpretation of life

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And the girl, id makenit more obviously she is of desth

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For example

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Kali ma has skulls and knives