Hi! Smelling the end of this piece soon and was wondering if you had any feedback/ideas/tips/suggestions/constructive criticism to improve it?
-# (Unsure of the spirals and upper body part, also the mouth)
Any input is truly and warmly appreciated 
#Looking for constructive criticism
elder bane
Looking for constructive criticism
gusty wolf
In my opinion I suggest to make the line work cleaner I see that you aren't fully doing it the shoulder look rough if you fully look at it.
elder bane
In my opinion I suggest to make the line work cleaner I see that you aren't full...
You’re absolutely right, I hadn’t noticed 
Thank you so much!!