Tips

[analog bear]

I was drawing a collarbone and something looks very wrong and I would like tips. I know I’m bad at anatomy but something feels off so pls give me suggestions!

[terse crag]

was the right your reference???

[analog bear]

yes

[terse crag]

yours looks INFINTELY better than the reference i think. theres still a lot to improve but i would not at all use that as a reference as to what to do

i would use a real human being

[analog bear]

Okay I'll try that

I actually used mutiple references including that one but I couldn't find the other one

[terse crag]

ohh i see

the reference you showed here was not made by a very skilled artist (no offence to them) so i wouldnt take their art as an example of what you should be striving for

[analog bear]

I knoww It was just as a reference for where to put the darker shading

But ty for the advice

[bitter pulsar]

I recommend with this sort of thing to use photo references rather than someone else’s art. This is something that if you learn based on something incorrect, then youll learn things incorrectly and youll have to learn it all over again which gets really annoying

[brave cove]

I think you should work with the shading. It is difficult to understand where the light source comes from. Another tip is that the chest area is usually very highlighted. You're doing great though