need help with coloring

[latent zodiac]

i think something wrong with this drawing (forget about hair, wip)

[wide basalt]

I think this drawing is pretty good. The color choices on the face are pretty beautiful. If you’re looking to change something, proportion wise, try flipping the canvas horizontally and reevaluate how you want the drawing to look, or flip it upside down if you’re drawing exactly from a reference. That always helps me make sure I get anatomy right.

[wide basalt]

This is how I’d start

[night scroll]

I think her neck is too far forward. It looks like shes pushing her head back into her neck which is very unnatural and not a very sad look