twin jetty
hi! This is a rough sketch but i wanted to change the fingers a bit and the eye brow. I also wanted to make it more my style. I am hoping to add ontop more of the star aesthetic but that will come later, just using a reference not trying to redraw it if that makes sense? However i feel like something might be looking off here! Im really not too sure! Ontop of that i have no clue how to make eye lashses not look like separtic lines :’). Any help is much appreciated 🫶🫶🫶🫶
twin jetty
changed by some other people’s recommendations
hollow phoenix
The fingers are way too small in comparison to the eye. Your eye is approximately two fingers wide. This makes it look more like 5 or more
gleaming silo
I simplified the shapes for you so it’s super easy to see
The top eyelid can be simplified into 3 lines
Which is super obvious in the reference
And I simplified the bottom into two lines the first line is following the natural eye shape and the curved is from being pulled
If you follow the reference like this you can get a super clean looking drawing
This is how it would look following the reference
twin jetty
I realized the fingers were wayyy too small still
hollow phoenix
I realized the fingers were wayyy too small still
Look at the reference. One finger is about half the width of the eye
