#Drawing not giving ' it '

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trail verge
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Hi! I would love if someone can tell me what this drawing is missing, I find it not good enough, I would love if I get a bit of support and advice!!
:3

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I tried something but still isn't enough!

cyan arrow
split halo
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You also have the far eye being way smaller than the neat eye. Yes there is a slight shift, but not by that much even in forced perspective. Do you have a reference youre trying to emulate?

trail verge
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Yes this!