Genral critique

[leaden wharf]

Anyone?

[hard raptor]

Please be patient. People have lives outside the server and not everyone can help with this sort of thing

[leaden wharf]

oh I am definetly not in an urgent situation here just wanted to know how to make it more expressive

[tall tide]

If you want to make it more expressive try changing up the expression of one of the eyes, in this case the right side one. Try opening it up more slightly and raising the right eyebrow too. Also why on earth are you drawing this 😭