#How do I make the couch in the background look better? P2

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gritty glen
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Anyway to fix the couch's shape without ruing character in the middle? Critique welcome ^_^

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I'm happy for someone to point of any other flaws tho

cold halo
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Idk im bad at art but the couch looks a little flat

gritty glen
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can u specify srry A_A_uncomf

covert glade
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it’s mainly unclear form imo!! i can do a quick lil sketch to help if youd like!

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basically things have weird angles(the front of the armrest and the couch seem to be facing slightly differently)
aswell as this, to expand on the unclear form, the arm rest is overlapping weirdly on the couch, making it difficult to tell where its coming out of

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heres a lil bit on how id do it(you can use and trace this if that helps you learn!

gritty glen
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Tysmm!!! I'll update you :D

midnight hazel
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I think trying to practice on perspective lines will do some good. And where the horizon goes

covert glade
gritty glen
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I finished but it looks boring 😔