Lil help

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I drawing this image, tell me if theres anything i can improve before lining it

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Idk if this is weird but u forgot to add the thong

And the back part of the jacket

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Oh yeah. My bad

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This part

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you could probably exhaggerate the bend in her back a little. this will remove the tangent lines of the water bottle and her body (tangent lines are generally seen as a bad thing in art, as it makes your art look more flat)

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Thanks for the help, i just got done with the lineart,

Now time for colors and shading