Give me advices please!

[serene osprey]

The art is not finished but I mainly want to know how to highlight eyes, if there’s any other advice you can give me please do! ໒꒰ྀི⸝⸝´ ˘ `⸝⸝꒱ྀིა

[serene osprey]

Update the eyes look so odd please HEKp

[worn harness]

I think they look odd because of the proportions

her forehead is MASSIVE

Eyes are usually placed in the middle of the head (from scalp to chin pretty sure)

and vary a little from person to person

so either shrink the forehead or move the entire face up

Other than that its good art! :>

[serene osprey]

OHHH make sense now tysm 😭❤️

[serene osprey]

AHHH THANK U

[worn harness]

Can i see the end result?? :>

[serene osprey]

ARGHHH I wish but my dumb ahh made the layers separate so I can’t adjust the forehead

Here’s another finished drawing instead

[worn harness]

Looks A LOT better!!!

[serene osprey]

TYSM 😭💝

[radiant stream]

Looks great but there's a serious lack of contrast. Everything is sort of on the same gray scale value. Brighter colours would help

[serene osprey]

I see I see, so you mean I should make more clear difference with the colors of the eyes?and by bright, can u give me examples please?

[radiant stream]

Pretty much, the pink and the blue of the hair have the same value, and the skin tone is just slightly lighter. The eyes also pretty much use the same set of values

Despite the separation of colour in the not b/w image, they all sort of look like the same colour at a glace

[radiant stream]

By bright I just mean less desaturated colours

Not asking you to follow this, just an example of sorts

Even in black and white the colour difference is apparentl