#What is off?

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teal wharf Jun 17, 2025, 11:37 AM

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I feel like maybe his face looks odd or something? Can someone else look cus I can’t figure it out.

glacial kindle Jun 17, 2025, 1:01 PM

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I think its the eye? Not exactly the same eye shape one is straight and other is a little bit to the up
Or the jawline perhaps

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This is just my opinion

regal echo Jun 17, 2025, 1:45 PM

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Probably the neck is too thick?

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Or is it the jawline

pearl forge Jun 17, 2025, 2:00 PM

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Found a similar reference, if you take a look at the right arm (our view) it's behind the fabric, yours goes over the fabric initially but then randomly cuts and he other one doesn't do either, it just meets the fabric. Maybe try following this a bit closer

Also that foream is absolutely massive, it's bigger than the bicep/tricep area. Either make the biceps bigger or the fore arms smaller. Maybe try giving him larger traps though that would be more of an aesthetic choice rather than an anatomical fix.

The shadows are kind of weird as well, especially on the right arm just seems off, I'm not sure the two highlights would be here.

Not sure about this one but he fabric on the right side is higher than the left side, might be an aesthetic choice but it makes it look awkward especially with the first issue.

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The arm is also extremely straight, maybe a slight bend like in he picture I sent? Doesn't look natural

jolly crow Jun 17, 2025, 3:10 PM

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teal wharf I feel like maybe his face looks odd or something? Can someone else look cus I c...

The head is rendered very differently

teal wharf Jun 17, 2025, 3:41 PM

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Heyyy thanks for all the feedback. How is it looking now? Did I miss anything? I changed the arms and the size of the eyes and head.

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And rendered a bit more.

teal wharf Jun 17, 2025, 4:11 PM

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echo jetty Jun 17, 2025, 4:18 PM

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How do I share lol

glacial kindle Jun 17, 2025, 4:29 PM

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glacial kindle Jun 17, 2025, 4:30 PM

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I think the jawline needs more fixing

echo jetty Jun 17, 2025, 4:31 PM

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glacial kindle Jun 17, 2025, 4:31 PM

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I think the jawline are not in 1 straight line as if the left is more down and the right more to the up

echo jetty Jun 17, 2025, 4:32 PM

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Thx I'm new lol

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Anything wrong

teal wharf Jun 18, 2025, 12:34 PM

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So here:

glacial kindle Jun 18, 2025, 1:09 PM

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Looks ok now in my opinion

pearl forge Jun 18, 2025, 2:05 PM

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teal wharf So here:

Longer arms, the arms typically cross the crotch line

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pearl forge Jun 18, 2025, 2:07 PM

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pearl forge Found a similar reference, if you take a look at the right arm (our view) it's b...

Even here the straighter arm crosses the crotch

teal wharf Jun 18, 2025, 2:53 PM

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Did I make em long enough now? 😄

storm island Jun 18, 2025, 3:06 PM

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Im new to digital art so I'm not entirely sure what I need to do, but I feel like there's something I need to fix here

pearl forge Jun 18, 2025, 3:17 PM

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teal wharf Did I make em long enough now? 😄

Much better

pearl forge Jun 18, 2025, 3:18 PM

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storm island Im new to digital art so I'm not entirely sure what I need to do, but I feel lik...

Make a post in the art help rather than post in otther people's discussions, easier for people to notice and doesn't obstruct the original questioner

storm island Jun 18, 2025, 3:19 PM

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Oh, sorry. I just got here so I don't where stuff is

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My bad

pearl forge Jun 18, 2025, 3:19 PM

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Yeah no worries at all