colour anatomy and render

[wise wadi]

i rlly like how the guy is rendered but i’m not so shut about the girl. she seems much more flat but idk have to render her better. can i also get advise on her hand?? it’s quite odd lokkknf but idk how to fix it all help is welcome THANK YOU

[strange sun]

I know absolutely nothing about rendering, so take this with a big handful of salt.

I see the guy has some really nice rendering under his eyes, maybe you could try to make the rendering under the girls eyes more pronounced? Once again, I’m no professional!

[spice hedge]

Her hair would cast a light shadow on the right side of her face. Not the whole way through but probably at the top of her hend and the bottom because hair flays out at the bottom and basically acts as a curain of sorts.

You might want to bring up the palm holding the lipstick as well. Only the palm part of it, the hand itself is fine.

The hand holding his face is pretty large. On average (not a rule of thumb) females have smaller hands. Bring her fingers lower to grasp just his chin and not the whole bottom half of his head. If you look at the thumb on that hand it goes inwards which, while can happen, I suggest it protruding outwards

Maybe you can work in a light blush? I mean she is kind of littering his face with kisses

Overall very cute drawing

[ember sable]

Well

There are no shadows for one

And her highlights are very dull

Push her highlights and shadows more

[wise wadi]

thank you sm for the help🩷🩷

[wise wadi]

thank you 🩷