I just finished this drawing but I feel like it could be better but I can’t put my finger on what so I’m here looking for some critiques to help me make this drawing better!
#Critiques please!
sacred fog
delicate epoch
great drawing first off! the colouring especially stands out to me! really effective. i think the thing that feels most "off" to me would be the pose it feels like the characters arm and body are separate entitys (to me at least). i think this could be due to the lack of suggestion in the anatomy of the shoulder area, and the draping of the clothes. while the forearm and hand on top feel quite 3d, the area beneath it doesn't as much? to me at least?
to be honest this was a hard piece to critique at all, i think even what i pointed out suits this style in a way. i hope i helped at all 😄
sacred fog
great drawing first off! the colouring especially stands out to me! really effec...
Ty for the compliment! And I see what u mean by the arm and the character not looking connected let me see what I can do about it
delicate epoch
your attitude is great 😄 keep it up
and youre welcome
also! i only noticed this now which says a lot! the ear anatomy isnt correct for the level of detail you have drawn it at. maybe have a quick study of ears (i had to do this too, but iterally once years ago and now i barely have to think about it!)
good on you for not just covering it up with hair though! thats what i used to do haha
sacred fog
good on you for not just covering it up with hair though! thats what i used to d...
Okay I tried to add some of the things you mentioned and this is what I came up with! Tell me if I should still change anything or if you meant something in a different way so I can try to fix it
Also tried to fix the ear because I got lazy on it lol
delicate epoch
the ear looks gorg
wham improvement
great job
overlapping the arm more did really help with making them seem more connected for sure
good solve dude
i think it looks sound
the ear could do with being a bit bigger (vertically) but maybe the character has small ears who am i to say
i know a girl with really small ears tbf
sacred fog
Alr made her ear bigger! I think it looks rlly good now but should I change anything else?
delicate epoch
this is really nitpicky but i think the fold in her skin where the arm starts being so super angular makes it not look like an organic form in that one itty bitty region
i think having a look at how the skin interacts there could help with that
but its so far from the focal point of the image i dont reckon people will notice at all
i think this is really really good
also how did u get your GAG tag thats so fire
sacred fog
also how did u get your GAG tag thats so fire
I got it from an unofficial grow a garden discord lol it just popped up on my screen asking if I wanted it