#The lighting, render or colors are weird

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hard frigate
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Made a miku fanart of romeo and cinderella Idk what to say, Ive put a lot of hours on this one but I can't seem to like it, there's something off about it. I think the composition is great but something about the render takes me off.

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queen fiber
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She looks like a child

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I was about to comment that you're a disgusting freak and to get off the internet and get therapy

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Because that looks like a kid

hard frigate
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what

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bro

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is a fanart

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of an existing

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character

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that is not mine

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clearly not underage

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wdym???? why would I draw stuff like that when im 17????? Are u out of ur mind???

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search the specific character up??? 😟😟😟

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I don't want it to look like a kid bro u freak me out

queen fiber
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yea i fiqured out it was fanart after i read your thing on the top

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im saying the head is too big

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and it makes the character look like a child?

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😭

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what

hard frigate
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im sorry but i think is the angle where ur seeing it

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like

queen fiber
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what

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i have no idea what youre saying

hard frigate
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I drew it so u are actually looking at a diagonal direction, not her frontal

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bro perspective

queen fiber
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that does not change the fact her head is too big

hard frigate
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uhm yes it does???

queen fiber
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no it doesnt? what

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heads should be about 1/3 the lenght of the shoulders

hard frigate
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i think ur not understanding her positioning

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bro

queen fiber
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i understand but im saying you didnt draw it properly

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and her head is too big

hard frigate
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when u see someone from their upper side, the head hides the neck

queen fiber
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i know

hard frigate
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And you see their head bigger?

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thats what im saying

queen fiber
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i know? but that doesnt mean it has to be the size of the entire chest yo πŸ’€

hard frigate
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bro the head is hiding her neck

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and you can see part of her chest

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wdym

queen fiber
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is english your first language?

hard frigate
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im really fluent at it

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spanish is my first

queen fiber
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okay

hard frigate
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why tho

queen fiber
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i think theres a language barrier or something because

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i have no idea what youre on about

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😭

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just make the head smaller and see if it looks better mate

hard frigate
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please I swear is her position πŸ™

queen fiber
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if you dont like it you dont have to keep it

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just see

daring plank
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yea i gotta agree she does look like a child in this piece

hard frigate
queen fiber
hard frigate
queen fiber
hard frigate
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brooo istg that was not my intention

hard frigate
queen fiber
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I know 😭 πŸ™ thats what i was saying in the first bit

daring plank
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i get that its perspective and all that but her body is just really small compared to her head for an adult

hard frigate
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at this point I rather make the body bigger

daring plank
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yeah the head is the focal point adjusting it might be more difficult than just editing the body

hard frigate
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okay ill try it out and send it

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there are some mistakes but i wanna know if it looks better now πŸ™πŸ™

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shrewd pecan
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the first image is the proportions i traced from your painting. notice how when the rendering is gone and its just construction lines, the glaring anatomy issues are now visible..

  • left arm length is too short
  • apple in scale is way too big (the scale issue is one of the reason why it looks more kid-like)
  • the right arm is completely hidden (ik its not like you forgot but its best not to hide it from the viewer completely)
  • the ribcage is too big and could be at a better angle when compared to the hip twist (this one is a little bit harder to explain, you just gotta practice poses)
  • as for the legs, i know its a fanart of that coverart, but you dont have to force both legs to be straight all the time, you can push one forward for more variety!
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now the 2nd image is my try at getting a more accurate pose and fixing the things i mentioned

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the shoulders were also implied to be very narrow which can also contribute to the child-likeness since the head would look big in comparison

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@hard frigate

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all these issues are actually quite big changes so i dont even expect them to be implemented, just keep them in mind for your next pieces at the very leastπŸ—£οΈ

ruby leaf
queen fiber
hard frigate
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I will actually try to fix it one more time so tysm!!!

hard frigate
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@shrewd pecan took me a while but I fixed it!!!

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what do u think?

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u definitely were really right about the anatomy, I think it looks a lot better now than before!!!!

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Im really bad at anatomy even though I practice it a lot and I can't detect those mistakes by myself sooooo

shrewd pecan
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nice jobb