#critique for this drawing?
little orbit
oh i feel like i should say, the drawing is blue because i was doing the colorblind drawing challenge. i feel like the weakest area of this drawing is that her top looks like long strands of hair but idk how to fix that
crystal pilot
I didn't think it looked like strands of hair tho ❤️
I notice I got the line wrong
little orbit
I didn't think it looked like strands of hair tho ❤️
oh okay!! thank you. i didnt realy think it looked right since they are the exact same shade but it looked similar in the ref
crystal pilot
crystal pilot
Great work! You could clean this up a bit but no need imo
Sorry for the confusion. Anyway, shadows describe form and highlights describe texture. If you really wanted then you could hint at a texture
There's no need because i think it's beautiful
little orbit
Sorry for the confusion. Anyway, shadows describe form and highlights describe t...
okay!!! ill try that, thank you!!! <3
molten basalt
Hey, looks nice. Your usage of edge control has significantly improved and youve established nice plane transitions from cheekbones to lower jaw. I would suggest bringing your highlights a bit higher in key and perhaps closer to the white?
And the clavicle feels a bit barren as you indicate depth near the acromion process but there’s no shading near the jugular notch.
loud garden
little orbit
thank you guys!!!