Fubuki drawing

[fallow pendant]

I want to get some critiques on proportions before i continue this

[thick mural]

The right shoulder from our view should pop out more, not enough room there for the shoulder blade

Also both of her arms seem to be moving straight up in your image whereas in the reference they are up and out. The further up you go make it bitter to show the increase in size due to perspective.

Break the arm into the forearm and the bicep rather than use a singular set of lines.

The head should be a tad bit bigger, mostly towards the top of her head

Hope this helps

[fallow pendant]

Thanks 😀

[remote sluice]

It’s really good so far, but i think the shoulders you drew aren’t connecting to the chest so I think you should make her shoulders a bit wider. Though I’m not good at anatomy myself so I’m not entirely confident with my critique

[fallow pendant]

Am done and this is the final piece

[thick mural]

Looks great man