#Need advice with torso

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wary pewter
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Most of the video I find is either a tutorial on the muscles of the torso or just simple boxes and shapes. I still don't really understand how to do the middle step. Any recommendations for torso tutorials?

frozen grotto
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The problem is proportions and the use sharp transitions. Just from looking at the anatomy, I can alr tell you learned earnestly abt the muscles, which is why you add all these distinctive transitions and curves at the bottom half of the torso, but they’re not doing you any favors at this stage. These transitions between muscle groups are hardly noticeable irl, and even more so when the person is stand straight 😁 Just use a nice curve to connect from the ribcage to the pelvic bone would already be an improvement from the current version!

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Also, the bottom half of the torso is too short

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An easy way to measure the proportion of the body is that the length between the collarbone to the bottom of the ribcage is roughly same as the length from bottom ribcage to the bottom of the pelvic bone

wary pewter
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tysm

wary pewter
frozen grotto
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Dude! This is great improvement from the originally 😁😁 Sure, some minor issues about the lower leg muscles and the ribcage shape and length (A bit long), but I think it is a very good attempt

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Just keep looking at videos or references, and find out what seems off yourself would be the best