#General Critique

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river scroll
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Can someone help me find issues on my drawing's proportions

runic jetty
weary oasis
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such as her arms

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are not the same length

river scroll
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anything else?

runic jetty
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Arms look short. Pick a lineup and stretch that artwork out

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Helpful tip: Take the size(length) of your blondie's head, and draw lines on the side of your image as reference

river scroll
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I increased the length of her arms a bit

weary oasis
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Nice

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Hands and feet can be bigger

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Put ur hand over ur eye

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Ur whole hand can cover 1/2 of ur face

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That's around how big her hands should be

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Feet are like as wide as the hand

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Then after u make those changes

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Maybe the face can be adjusted?

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Then I think that basically it for ratios

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Then u can work on anatomy

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And then form of the clothing

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Then adjusting the wrinkles on the clothes

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:3

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Is there any of these u want me to elaborate on rn? Or do u want me to wait until you've attempted it and then u ask what went good ✅ and what went bad ❌

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(or mix of both)

river scroll
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lemme try to fix it first

weary oasis
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All u bestie

runic jetty
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Lookt dem heads

river scroll
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Tried fixing some of it, not really sure on how to fix the clothes

runic jetty
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Nice hands

river scroll
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Thanks bro

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Are the clothing wrinkles accurate?

runic jetty
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Not exactly. It's difficult. Spiral folds are usually found on the sleeves.

Don't worry about it too much for now. Study references to gain a better grasp.

Folds depend on the body underneath. Here are common examples

river scroll
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Thanks brother, I'll makr use of this

river scroll
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Tried to fix the clothes wrinkles

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I'd also appreciate it if someone would recommend how to do shadows and adjust the face on this drawing

clear atlas
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pick to colors, mad shapes where you think the folds are and then blend it, after that keep going to the smaller details

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try to use different hue then you base colors for more interest if you want to and look up ref until you feel confident enough

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once you get it it becomes the most fun partA_A_stars

runic jetty
runic jetty
river scroll
clear atlas
river scroll
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fixed the wrinkles of the shirt and pants

weary oasis
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🤨

soft hound
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How I do that??

young scarab
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click the "create post" button in the upper right corner

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its blue with a message icon

soft hound
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Got it thank you

river scroll
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Can anyone advise me on the rendering for the skin and light sources

river scroll
river scroll
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Well, I wanted to draw a light bulb above her head later so I am not reall sure how the shadows would look on her

runic jetty
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have you looked for a reference or used a 3d model online

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could help