#General Critique
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anything else?
Arms look short. Pick a lineup and stretch that artwork out
Helpful tip: Take the size(length) of your blondie's head, and draw lines on the side of your image as reference
I increased the length of her arms a bit
Nice
Hands and feet can be bigger
Put ur hand over ur eye
Ur whole hand can cover 1/2 of ur face
That's around how big her hands should be
Feet are like as wide as the hand
Then after u make those changes
Maybe the face can be adjusted?
Then I think that basically it for ratios
Then u can work on anatomy
And then form of the clothing
Then adjusting the wrinkles on the clothes
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Is there any of these u want me to elaborate on rn? Or do u want me to wait until you've attempted it and then u ask what went good ✅ and what went bad ❌
(or mix of both)
lemme try to fix it first
All u bestie
Lookt dem heads
Tried fixing some of it, not really sure on how to fix the clothes
Nice hands
Not exactly. It's difficult. Spiral folds are usually found on the sleeves.
Don't worry about it too much for now. Study references to gain a better grasp.
Folds depend on the body underneath. Here are common examples
Thanks brother, I'll makr use of this
Tried to fix the clothes wrinkles
I'd also appreciate it if someone would recommend how to do shadows and adjust the face on this drawing
pick to colors, mad shapes where you think the folds are and then blend it, after that keep going to the smaller details
try to use different hue then you base colors for more interest if you want to and look up ref until you feel confident enough
once you get it it becomes the most fun part
Nice shirt
Start a new layer and lower the value of her skintone a touch. Play around with shading
Or
Add a multiply layer, fill in the whole canvas, and erase the parts lit up
What brushes did you use?
I only use one, monobrush
fixed the wrinkles of the shirt and pants
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How I do that??
click the "create post" button in the upper right corner
its blue with a message icon
Got it thank you
Can anyone advise me on the rendering for the skin and light sources
Any troubles?
Well, I wanted to draw a light bulb above her head later so I am not reall sure how the shadows would look on her