Help with the face?

[hollow olive]

Hello!!
Need help figuring out Froppys face, it just looks off to me and I'm unsure how to fix it? Can anyone gimme any pointers? Lots of love if ya figure out what it is 🤣🤣
Thank you!! ♡♡

[fickle orchid]

This is cute! Is it ok if I draw over it to correct some stuff on the face?

[hollow olive]

That's fine! Please do :))

[fickle orchid]

Not the best but yea! Also since Tsuyu's smile is unique, you may have to convey her happiness through her eyes as well but this really isnt necessary

[hollow olive]

Ahh ur right, I'll fix that in a lil bit thank you!! Ik the pupils need fixing im also unsure bout it, I'll have to play around thank u tho ♡

[solid zealot]

I think her pupils are not looking in the same way maybe?

[hollow olive]

I did a bit of fixing as well as finished colouring, any other advice on what i can do? D;

[fickle orchid]

This looks so great!

Maybe you can add a chromatic aberration effect or something like that but it looks pretty finished to me 🫶🫶

[hushed stone]

If this is cloth it should come across her chest like this

Most shirts don't follow the curvature of the breasts. Even tight suits like this