any advice for my artwork?!?

[odd hound]

please dont say too many sparkles or i will actually cry

[frigid moat]

It’s almost impossible to look at this piece without jetting your eyes all over the canvas.. due to the sparkles.

[odd hound]

TwTTTT thats just part of my art style i was more hoping on advice with anatomy or something

[hot rock]

Lol yeah agree with Nobody about sparkles, the body looks too long and boobs position seems too high

You can try move moulth position slighly up and see how is the difference?

[odd hound]

ohhh ok thank you!!

[fervent moon]

I say darken up a bit more the background just a bit bc the main enfasis is the girls but the background doesn’t help much it’s beautiful but i say to make it stand out more just a but more dark

[odd hound]

aaa tysm!! ill try that i struggle to pick good bg colors sometimes lol

[short token]

Mizi's upper arm on her right seems a little bit short for her pose but that is absolutely gorgeous work I love it

I also agree with the loopv person about the chest. Another thing I would add is that mizi's neck should be moved back in the direction of her ear. Her shoulder seems to disappear and I see that the idea is that the hair is covering it but by the shadows in the hair it doesn't look convincing

Is it alright if I draw over the areas to show you?? I feel like that way it would be easier to show what I mean

[pallid saffron]

never enough sparkles

you could try out different intensities in the sparkles, some of them should be translucent

[cerulean iris]

maybe try and find a way to emphasize the faces to make them more prominent? you could put a filter over the drawing and emphasize the faces like that, because the first thing i am drawn to is like the center of the painting because thats where the dark of the dress looks the brightest. the sparkles are super pretty btw!! <3

[odd hound]

aaaa super sorry for the late replyy!! i think i get what you mean but u can totally do that if u like! all ur advice is super helpful tho tysm anyway ^^

[odd hound]

YESSS YOU GET IT

[odd hound]

i kinda tried to do that in some places but i dont think it was very obvious TwT

[odd hound]

ohhh okay!! so just like adding more contrast around them in general??

[pallid saffron]

It's cause your sparkles are just 1 flat colour, when they're usually like bright in the center then flare out a lil dimmer

There might be a brush you can find for sparkles

What painting program do you use? I'll try to help find some

[cerulean iris]

mhm!!

[odd hound]

aa i draw them by hand lol