Gesture

[ionic scaffold]

We need to see your attempts. These are photos/promo material

[normal skiff]

Oh I forgot.

[ocean stirrup]

Looks rlly food

Good

Maybe focus on perspective or what parts of the character are closer to us

Will look bigger

[mellow tiger]

You’re using too many repetitive lines and not a whole ton of exaggeration & flow with your line work.

[normal skiff]

As in me
Adding lines to show form right?

[mellow tiger]

yeah, gesture isn’t the style where you show as much structure but a matter of how each mass flows into the other with minimal line work. When you add too many lines (especially blocking things in) it defeats the whole point of gesture

It’s supposed to be loose.

[ripe remnant]

These are really good tbh

[rare totem]

U are focus on the shapes and getting them done is good, but u are not much experienced in this, so just start small and draw some basic curves

Like 3-5curves for one pose in under 30second

Then try lill but detail, just make the poses full devoid of details tho

In 2mins at max

And focus on speed so you'll get the curves look artistic with experience

And...then u should be prepared to get into details

[normal skiff]

How would you know I’m not experienced.

Please don’t say that.

[ionic scaffold]

Theyre not saying youre inexperienced. Theyre saying that you visibly dont have a ton of experience in this specifically. Not at all saying you as an artist are inexperienced

[rare totem]

No it's not like that alone!, ik u are able to fit in those cylinders and cubes well in the human structure which is impossible for a biggener so u are good at it ,for about gestures it'll be more viable to use flow and rhythm of curves rather than boxes it'll make your sketches dynamic

And u are not experienced to see the curves of tension and smoothness, cas i you know then it would have been present in your cylinders and cubes