This looks off, please help

[tawny vortex]

Since we’re looking up at her we’d see the head more from the bottom than face front

I think redo the top of the head and place the hairline higher near the top cuz we wouldnt be seeing it that much

If u want i can draw over a bit to better visualize

[smoky linden]

If you could, that would be great

[tawny vortex]

Okey gimme a sec

Heres what i mean