#Uh anything I should add or fix?

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sharp lance
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Anything that I could add or fix here? I made this for my class but I want to make sure if I could fix anythingA_A_sobbing

(I also put the ref on the bottom)

proper vigil
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I would prob smothen the shadows by going over it with your thumb,but im not an expert. maybe try what looks better to you with another drawing. (Sry for my english)

buoyant scroll
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Hopefully this helps

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It’s looking nice so far I just think compared to the reference your lines are a lot more obvious. Proportions and readability are definitely great here and your lighting is good it’s clear you observed it fully and that’s the hard bit