Can someone please help me with the face? | Art Club | Page 1

tough hornet Mar 28, 2025, 1:56 PM

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The face essay the eyes are annoying me what do I need to fix?

plush stirrup Mar 28, 2025, 2:12 PM

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to me the hand looks more distracting, id recommend not tracing a real hand if your drawing a stylised character, maybe look at some anime hands to see how they would do it so it fits in

tough hornet Mar 28, 2025, 2:18 PM

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The reference was from Marin kitagawa

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She looks like this:

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plush stirrup Mar 28, 2025, 2:20 PM

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isnt the drawing hatsuni miku

tough hornet Mar 28, 2025, 2:20 PM

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Yeah but I couldn't find any hands I thought that i could draw of that fit the angle.

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So I looked up anime girl hand and found the one I did

plush stirrup Mar 28, 2025, 2:21 PM

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do you have that reference, becuase im sure ive seen her hands before, and the hand you got looks like a real hand rather than stylised

tough hornet Mar 28, 2025, 2:23 PM

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Nope

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I didn't save it just had it on my monitor

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It went from the anime tho it was some yahoo artists

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Not yahoo Pintrest got the mixed up

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Gonna use this one now though

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plush stirrup Mar 28, 2025, 2:24 PM

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yeah her fingers are way thinner and pointier

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but with the face

tough hornet Mar 28, 2025, 2:24 PM

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Anyway how do I fix the eyes please it is really annoying me.

plush stirrup Mar 28, 2025, 2:25 PM

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i think the angle of the features and the head dont line up

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her face is slightly rotated the the right by a few degrees

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if you get what i mean

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if you follow her hair part, it should line up with the centerline of her face

tough hornet Mar 28, 2025, 2:26 PM

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This is why I hate drawing faces

plush stirrup Mar 28, 2025, 2:26 PM

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haha, just make sure your construction is right before you go into line

tough hornet Mar 28, 2025, 2:26 PM

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You mess up ever so slightly and it looks awful

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Yeah will do

plush stirrup Mar 28, 2025, 2:27 PM

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her head is also quite large

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like the back of her head

tough hornet Mar 28, 2025, 2:28 PM

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Yeah but anime just have big head in em

plush stirrup Mar 28, 2025, 2:28 PM

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but hers is extra large

vapid brook Mar 28, 2025, 2:28 PM

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i tried to fix the head and fail but repositioning the shoulder help, also yeah the hand lol its too big and fliped

tough hornet Mar 28, 2025, 2:29 PM

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Ok will work on it

plush stirrup Mar 28, 2025, 2:29 PM

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your best bet might be to redraw the jaw line so its front facing rather than slightly 3/4

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since the head/hair is a front on perspective

tough hornet Mar 28, 2025, 2:30 PM

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Sorry but I always draw front ways and never 3/4 I need to learn it.

plush stirrup Mar 28, 2025, 2:31 PM

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well the right side of the check is more like a 3/4

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so you should fix that

vapid brook Mar 28, 2025, 2:32 PM

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yeah slighly 3/4, but i think fixing that part will take more time, the shoulder part and hand is much easier to fix

tough hornet Mar 28, 2025, 3:13 PM

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@vapid brook @plush stirrup

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I've fixed some of the problems and finished the legs

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rain quail Mar 28, 2025, 4:09 PM

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tough hornet The face essay the eyes are annoying me what do I need to fix?

Her hand is backwards

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Oh you fixed it

rain quail Mar 28, 2025, 4:10 PM

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tough hornet

The left arm is too long

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And the left hand is backwards now too

rain quail Mar 28, 2025, 4:12 PM

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tough hornet The face essay the eyes are annoying me what do I need to fix?

Tbh I think this hand looked better. I think if you just flipped it, it's look really good

vapid brook Mar 28, 2025, 4:45 PM

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tough hornet <@259851695109046272> <@410266278092079104>

yeah the other hand is still fliped, and too long, i guess you know what u doing for the next part? nice work

rain quail Mar 28, 2025, 4:50 PM

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tough hornet

Btw when you're shading this time, use a variety of colours instead of using 1 colour and making it darker

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In ur other pieces it's a bit dark rather than vibrant and such, and I feel like for this character, vibrancy should be especially used

tough hornet Mar 28, 2025, 5:38 PM

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rain quail In ur other pieces it's a bit dark rather than vibrant and such, and I feel like...

@rain quail Too be fair I use colours just make them dark like in this one.

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Like I do it sometimes I just make them to dark.

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But yeah I get what you mean

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I'll try use lighter blues

rain quail Mar 28, 2025, 5:53 PM

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tough hornet <@1180287791981146186> Too be fair I use colours just make them dark like in thi...

I know 😓 u used to send me ur art. I just remember when you would, the colours were sometimes a but on the grayer side. Like on the spy x family drawing. Ofc I haven't seen your art in like 2 months though so

tough hornet Mar 28, 2025, 6:01 PM

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rain quail I know 😓 u used to send me ur art. I just remember when you would, the colours ...

It's you damn

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I tried messaging you but it wouldn't let me

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Also I haven't drawn in two months so yeah😅

rain quail Mar 28, 2025, 6:26 PM

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tough hornet Also I haven't drawn in two months so yeah😅

Oh damn. Uour art looks improved though