#WIP critique

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knotty shadow
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I'm going to take a break before coloring, so I’m leaving this here for critique. I want to create an illustration that looks really cool with a handsome guy as the focus.

I want to make my art look like:
Sakusya2
Rolua
Arknights
Reverse 1999

Any criticism and advice is welcome!

lilac oyster
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your drawing looks really amazing, and im also new so i can only think of adding volume to top of the head might be more accurate MacchiStars

knotty shadow
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I like it, thank you for the suggestion! Im also new so there are still alot of things i overlook or dont know

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An artist I admire also add lots of volume to their hair

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I think adding more volume to the top definetly makes him look more appealing

exotic surge
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the hair is a tad stiff, I'd fix that

knotty shadow