Made this and im asking for improvement

[quiet lake]

Hands aren’t proportional and neck is a touch small but that’s more of a style choice, overall a great start

A bit more like this I think, I may be a bit off but this should be a good starting place

Also, if you’re gonna have the hair like that, instead of having the head be flat add curves to give the hair more depth

[hybrid pond]

The arms are extremely short

And the body is overall pretty stiff if they’re meant to be falling straight down

[rugged smelt]

Yh ur right thanks for pointing it out

[rugged smelt]

U mean in like different lengths by the head?

[rugged smelt]

Do u mean i am meant to bent it more?

[hybrid pond]

Yes, here are some great examples. If you’re trying to draw someone that’s falling from somewhere super high up, then gravity is gonna affect them more. Their legs would be much more up and their torso would be bent. I think you could exaggerate it more to really emphasize the fact that they’re falling

BUT if they’re falling from a shorter height, then this wouldn’t really apply. It just depends on the context of your drawing