#Any feedback?

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hearty kelp
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Can I get feedback for this piece? It’s a character sheet for an indie animated series I’m currently creating and I’m open to suggestions on all of the characters, but mainly Ryoko! I had to fix her face shape by covering up the mistakes with hair, and she seems too stiff compared to the other characters! This is meant to be a professional character sheet in profile-view as character design!

ANY criticism is appreciated as well!

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jaunty gyro
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I mean you've done 3 quarters view for 2 other ones

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Hanako looks good, I would ref her face

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The cheekbone placement to jawline is correct there

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Also for some reason she looks less ethnically japanese than the other three

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Also the color pallete for them is very similar, it makes it seem like their in uniform unless that was the intention

static mortar
static mortar
jaunty gyro
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Sorry bad grammar I meant Kyoko doesn't look as japanese

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Hanako def looks japanese

static mortar
jaunty gyro
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Its more about the shapes

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Skin color can vary a lot so I don't think it's a definitive factor

static mortar
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Yeah true. I think Akuma looks the most japanese but I can’t really place my finger on what it is

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I think the biggest thing I’m seeing is the plane of the face. In most east/southeast asians, the eyes do not cave in as much as they would for caucasian people. Please do not take that in an offensive way lol, i have to experience this firsthand being chinese. If you don’t know what that is, I can send some examples, but all it means is the distance between the nose bridge and the eye socket is less. You can almost see the other eye if it’s not a perfect side profile. i’m terrible at explaining this sorry

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And I really think for Ryoko, making some lines for hair waves would suit her well. Either that, or make her eyes slimmer (not smaller)

hearty kelp
hearty kelp