Any advice for this drawing

[long current]

I really like the pose but i feel there's something wrong with it but i don't know how to fix it 😭

[buoyant zealot]

Just a suggestion, but maybe reposition the angle of one of her knees or feet so that it doesn’t look super symmetrical- other than that I think it looks pretty good

[long current]

Thanks for the suggestion :DD

[stuck lagoon]

Brb

[stuck lagoon]

Like hyperz said, the pelvis is slanted too far backz and the ribcage is slanted too far forward, which is basically making a human sandwich.

Additionally, redraw the character in a side view and you will se that they are severely unbalanced. I suggest you check this, before you go into line art next time.

You're main issue is you forget to implement the character into a scene, which in result either gives you a character that looks out of pocket, or that they are a cardboard cutout glued to a scene.

Or in this case, you give the basic hint at the floor beneath him, but fail to count for how the body looks within that 3d environment, from different angles.