URGENT CRITIQUE

[blazing viper]

And pls help me choose any additional critique is appreciated

Anyone ? I gtta submit this I am running out of time😭

[sand shadow]

hello puff, if you're in a rush to finish this i'll ignore the more fundamental problems and only mention the ones that are easy to fix:

[blazing viper]

YES PLS ALSO I DO NOT MIND IF U STATE THE FUNDAMENTAL ONES TYSM

[sand shadow]

1. highlights are not consistent. the highlights in her eyes imply the light source is coming from the top left, so the hair highlights should reflect that

[blazing viper]

[blazing viper]

Ic!

[sand shadow]

2. you forgot to add a shadow between her ring finger and pinky

3. one eyebrow is above the hair and one is under

4. her hoodie string should enter the hoodie through a hole

[blazing viper]

Yikes

[blazing viper]

But they r both under tho

[sand shadow]

5. is that her thumb nail?? it's wayyy too big

[blazing viper]

Oki!

[blazing viper]

Huh nails??? I did not add them

[sand shadow]

this one looks like it's above

[blazing viper]

Ohh j will fix that

[sand shadow]

last thing that's easy to fix is the back of her hair

[blazing viper]

Currently adding highlights

[sand shadow]

it's not even and it doesn't really connect

[blazing viper]

U mean the length?

[sand shadow]

yeah that's part of it

[blazing viper]

The hair characters hair r messy

[blazing viper]

This?

[sand shadow]

that works

[blazing viper]

So did everything till this point

Forgot the eyebros ajzjnxxmKz

Owl come back

[sand shadow]

looks better

if you have time i would fix the length of the hair

[blazing viper]

C-can u redline

[blazing viper]

Like this?

[sand shadow]

that works

[blazing viper]

Tysmmmmmm

[zenith verge]

honestly the highlights are so small u cant even tell LMAO

also wazzzaaa owl

you prolly submitted it already but for the sake of it;
try to match the level of shadows throughout

• example would be the backhair shadow is very dark and prominent, but everywhere else like skkn and especially clothing have so light and small shadows that you cant really tell where the light source even is

if you really want your art to pop/more appealing, try playing with harder angles
what i mean would be to try ensuring that your eyeline and your shoulderline are not parallel, and the text could be angled harder towards the character (see attached)

[zenith verge]

mb for the shitty ahh remix im outside

the more parallel the eye/shoulderline is, the more static it will look

viceversa if its less parallel and more angled, it will look more energetic

so u can play with that angle to achieve the exact energy level you want your character to have

that doesnt mean that having it parallel is always bad; if you want a cold/solemn look it might be good to have that parallel angle

[blazing viper]

I don't get any of that

[zenith verge]

HAHA sorry sorry okay ill whip up something rq

[unreal osprey]

This is just me but I'd probably give her some top teeth

Just like a strip of tooth as an idea

[unreal osprey]

It looks good still teeth or no teeth

Sorry for drawing over it it was just to get the idea across fast in case u liked it

Also added some simple shadows in eyes and hand

[blazing viper]

Ohhhhh I get it now!!