Am I doing this right??

[sand creek]

I’ve spent about a week trying to color this in differently… and I still can’t figure it out. Any tips? Taking anything. Heavy criticism appreciated!!
(Base is NOT mine)

[fast juniper]

What way are you looking to do it? Could you show some examples?

[mighty fossil]

The head is a little bit iffy

[sand creek]

Wdym?

[sand creek]

I’m looking to make it look a little bit more loose, something just seems off and I can’t put my finger on it.

[mighty fossil]

It doesn't have depth

Try it with putting a little bit more focus on the planes of the face.

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