uncanny valley

[red sparrow]

she looks so uncanny idk if its just because ive stared at it too long but?? still a sketch btw its just a cleaned up one

adjusted pupil cause it was lopsided

[ripe laurel]

I think it looks good. Main things id change is have the silhouette and big shapes have thicker lines and the reflection im her eyes to be bigger

[red sparrow]

yeah im gonna thicken up the lines once i get to lineart

right now im not super focused on lineweight as i just wanna see what im doing properly

[ripe laurel]

Got it

[dark jackal]

hello kaya, she looks uncanny because you can see the back of her hand and her palm at the same time, which shouldn't possible

[ripe laurel]

Theres something with the hair i just noticed

The hair chunks on the bangs are facing as though the head were turned the other way. Especially at the top of the bangs

[red sparrow]

@ripe laurel @dark jackal adjusted the hair wnd hands

i think the main thing i feel off about is the face

im not sure why yet but something about her face puts me off

oh i figured it out

it was the size of her pupils and how the whites of her eyes werent visible

[icy marsh]

This is so gas and I’m no expert but her eyes look soulless this is so good btw

[red sparrow]

yeah im trying to fix that but idk how 😭