Fixing a pose

[obtuse herald]

I haven’t done full art pieces in a while so I’m a little rusty anywho
I need help with this pose how should I fix it?

[lament path]

Draw with simple shapes as boxes in 3d or if you're not comfortable enough try to break down the pose in 2d simple shapes by tracing on it

I meant tracing on the ref

It helps a lot because it forces you to understand the pose before drawing it

Or if you want a fast way, trace one stroke by one on the ref (outline), and copy the line on your canvas.

[obtuse herald]

I did do a small version of it in my sketchbook

[lament path]

The torso is more tilted

It has less dynamism because you straightened the pose

Exaggerate the curves to make it dynamic and interesting

Srry I don't have much time left

[obtuse herald]

It’s cool

[lament path]

It shows the curve

Of his body

All the wight is on his left leg

Weight

[stoic fog]

This is really good, but you should understand what the lines mean,

Sometimes I indicate the stretchiest part of the body,

some times the curve of the spine

But most often I use it on every limbs to identify the movement of the limbs, I'll redo this rq and I'll show you what I mean.