CRTIQUIE NEEDED | Art Club | Page 1

glass kite Jan 22, 2025, 11:55 AM

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Any critique before I start line art?

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Pls I need to get this done by tmr A_A_sobbing

severe fossil Jan 22, 2025, 12:00 PM

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proportions look pretty spot on

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i think your good to start

glass kite Jan 22, 2025, 12:05 PM

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severe fossil i think your good to start

Thankyou!! A_A_sobbing

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A_Tedi_Love

severe fossil Jan 22, 2025, 12:07 PM

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i also drawing nothing like that

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so dont take my word for it lol

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maybe get a second opinion

glass kite Jan 22, 2025, 1:05 PM

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I will js practice coloring till then ig

mint oar Jan 22, 2025, 2:15 PM

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Its pretty good id only say that the eyes are a lil too close imo,maybe spearting them a little would improve it.

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Also its kind hard to know what she is wearing cuz the only piece of clothing is in her arm,maybe making in her back would help(unless you wanted to draw her in some part naked)

dense bough Jan 22, 2025, 2:56 PM

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woaa

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looks really cool

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i think ur ready to go, nothing much i would change tbh

sour rover Jan 22, 2025, 3:47 PM

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hello puff, the face looks mostly fine aside from her left eyebrow being higher then the right and inconsistencies in eye shape, but i would highly urge you to define the shapes/strands of the hair more

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also i would try to make the length of her hair more uniform

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