#Art crit pretty please!

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worldly wind
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How can I improve this drawing? Be harsh!

shut grove
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It sort of looks like the horse was just placed on top of the background so maybe cut off part of the hooves in the water so it looks more in the water, also add a shadow of some sorts.

Hope this helps ( :

worldly wind
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Thanks!

shut grove
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Just noticed that all the trees have reflections but the horse does not

worldly wind
shut grove
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Looks better 🤌

crude cloud
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Make the subject pop with much more contrast, highlights, detail.
If you're going to add that reflection, it needs to meet its origin. Why have a gap there??

tardy skiff
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make the background darker