Is the drawing all right?

[charred torrent]

I just wanted a different perspective as Iam not used to colouring and digital art. Any tips may help. 🙂

[summer socket]

Honestly I think this looks really good, what I can say is that the left eye (Our left) is a bit off. When the head is turned and looking at that angle the right eye (Our right) should be higher than the left eye and the bangs seem like they are sticking to the hair too much like glue

Aside from that I think that looks VERY good! I love her so much, love your style

Also another thing! The iris shape is too different from one another so it might look weird as well

[valid gulch]

The ear should be in shadow and it currently doesn't follow the tilt of the rest of the head. Just rotate it a bit counterclockwise or smt

[oblique cipher]

no its all left