#Would like as much critique on this as possible

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molten falcon
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good work so far. id def push the shadows of the face more. you have a base layer of shadow but youre missing out cast shadows and more form shadows

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with how the light hits, itd also affect the side of the righ cheek, the lips, nose, and eyes. you only have it mostly affecting the bigger bits of the face rn

sullen timber
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how'd you do that

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you just made it 50 times better

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i love it

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i just found this tool

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molten falcon
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and for the hair, a little bit of light would reach the left braid. youd also want to darken some of the shadows of the of the side where the light hits cuz the hair would cast shadows on itself

sullen timber
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and i just realized how wrong my lighting was

molten falcon
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and the inside whre the parting is

sullen timber
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aa noted

molten falcon
# sullen timber how'd you do that

went over with a multiply layer and added in the needed shadows. then an a layer adding in the lighting on normal. and an overlay layer with an orange where the shadow and reg colors meet cuz of how skin interacts with light

sullen timber
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i feel like your brush strokes have so much texture as well

molten falcon
sullen timber
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i see

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so i was doing okay, but i just need to push it that extra mile of adding cast shadows and defining the planes of the face

molten falcon
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youre doing fine. all proportions looks good to me

sullen timber
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cuz i see on the one you did, you have more definition around the nose area

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and you left some of the right collar bone get some light as well

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makes sense now that i think about it, its funny because i didnt have a reference to draw from

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i only looked for a reference for the hair

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i had the lighting in mind, maybe i should have found a reference similar to my drawing

molten falcon
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lolol i didn't either so i may have missed out on on key muscles/planes too. keep working on it and itll be all good

sullen timber
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thx for the hyel

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help*

molten falcon
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np

sullen timber
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but your oil painty look, looks way better

molten falcon
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only thing flesh out more is the hair. the transition from light to dark on the left side is a bit too harsh/sharp

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with how hair overlap with itself, thered be parts where light hits more than others

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and have more of a zig zag kind of transition