Perspective/proportions

[exotic topaz]

I'm drawing nilou from genshin and this perspective is a pain. I also added the linear structure cuz my current draft might have distracting details. Feel free to redraw anything.

Also if anyone has her in the game and doesn't mind, could you send some screenshots of her in this perspective, like a top down view?

[reef lava]

The perspective of the head doesn't mach the body, as the head covers neck from that perspective, the chest should also cover the stomach

It looks more foreshortened in the sketch than in the coloured

[lone sandal]

So imagine this pose as a picture. First point out what is further from the camera and closest to the camera. I colored the furthest in blue and the closest in red. The top of the head is the closest though I colored that the brightest red and the knee is the softest because it's further away but still pretty close.

Then break it into cylinders first starting with the closest piece to the furthest piece. Then you kind of get a sense of how the perspective is.

The same with the knee kind of gets a sense of their perspective.

Can kind of get a sense of the fluidity of the drawing. It goes up and down. From the closest to the furthest

Then I'd recommend breaking the entire piece into smaller cylinders. Like they did in the original drawing. Make sure to do more rigid shapes on the outside and then curved shapes and the inside.

[leaden shuttle]

Here u go

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[exotic topaz]

Ok thx guys sorry for late reply ❤️