#Any critiques?

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brittle mesa
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Also HAPPY NEW YEARRRR

twilit flint
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is the blue going to be removed?

brittle mesa
twilit flint
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it makes it look quite messy and it makes the character look very old to be fair,because every feature of his face is strongly defined by those blue lines

brittle mesa
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OH THE BLUE LINES

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Ahhh I see tyty

brittle mesa
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Progress pic ;3

brittle mesa
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More progress

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The rendering looks super off or it’s bc it’s 4am

glossy torrent
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You should try and make the shadows blend a little more. Combine soft and hard shadows

rich pine
# brittle mesa More progress

yooooo i love styles that shades using a posterization like quality. id scrunch the nose a bit to rlly exagerate the expression. it falls flat a bit rn

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i do miss the blue linework fr. like monogatari or no game no life vibes. makes it stand out.

brittle mesa
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Idk how to truly apply to it to make it more natural tho

wicked stream
rich pine
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Not rlly a bad thing if ur not going for 1:1

brittle mesa
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Ooooooh

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Yea not rlly going for 1:1

brittle mesa
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Final rendition, does the character blend into the background?

winter pollen
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feels black washed ngl.. also maybe making the shadows softer or blending

glossy torrent
brittle mesa
rich pine
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So it wont be so bright against the darker colors