#Any critiques?
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is the blue going to be removed?
Mainly for the bg to lay out the color, it’ll be tweaked
it makes it look quite messy and it makes the character look very old to be fair,because every feature of his face is strongly defined by those blue lines
Progress pic ;3
You should try and make the shadows blend a little more. Combine soft and hard shadows
yooooo i love styles that shades using a posterization like quality. id scrunch the nose a bit to rlly exagerate the expression. it falls flat a bit rn
i do miss the blue linework fr. like monogatari or no game no life vibes. makes it stand out.
Trueeee I really like the scribble type style
Idk how to truly apply to it to make it more natural tho
Yooo thx for the tip
The angle on your art’s face is different than the reference
The angle??
Refs head is turned downwards while urs is turned upwards
Not rlly a bad thing if ur not going for 1:1
Final rendition, does the character blend into the background?
feels black washed ngl.. also maybe making the shadows softer or blending
Bro chill. Drawing a character with darker skin than canonical is fine. Its the opposite thats bad
It’s the shadows overall
Just came to me that u can make it a darker blue
So it wont be so bright against the darker colors