advice and critisism pls!

[fiery elm]

i started annatomy learning for the first time ever and i can really see an improvement but i still want some tips and critique! (see image for before and afters)

[fathom bane]

Looks great, but I'd suggest looking a little more into eye sockets and eyelids, heres this:
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[slow flume]

there is too much buldge in the lower forehead and nose

[fathom bane]

That relates to the eye socket.

You should bring the eyes closer to the edge.