#Plz help

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unreal orchid
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Something is wrong and i cand pinpoint what

pure verge
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What exactly don't you like about it?

unreal orchid
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The eye location seems off but i don't know what to do to fix it

unreal orchid
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Also if you see any other problem, plz write it.

pure verge
# unreal orchid Something is wrong and i cand pinpoint what

OK let's start, the first point to remember is that you're sketching a stylistic and non realistic character, but you're also giving it the credit of a real person, resulting in unexpected results and a confused look,

I other words the anatomy you have drawn is just like the artwork (imo) but you're critiquing it with the responsibilities of a realism piece,

2 the eyes are fine, but I'd suggest looking more into the shading, instead of 1 layer of shading maybe do 2 layers for the midtones, and 3 layers for the dark darks.

unreal orchid
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With that said. Thank you very much. I now have a new perspective on the sketch as a whole.😄😄